In class we’ve been talking a lot about marking recently.
I’ve been trying to make my marking more purposeful and encouraging the children to use it in their personal target setting.
During one of our discussions a pupil made a comment that made me think about approaching a task in a back to front way.
I explained the task and, before they began, them asked them to help draft some marking comments that I might be able to use on a really good piece of work.
I guess it ‘s just a different way of getting them to identify success criteria before they actually start writing.
Think before you ink.
This was what they came up with.
This is excellent work because you have put your self in Pandora’s shoes. I can see how she feels during the story – good use of ‘show, not tell’.
You made some exciting vocabulary choices and I can see you used a dictionary.
You have used punctuation correctly and presented this work neatly.
Interestingly, this is the final revised version that we agreed on. Initially it started with the comment about presentation.
Sometimes it seems hard for the children (and some adults) to separate content from presentation.
Is neat work always good quality work?
Of course it isn’t, yet so often it seems to be perceived as ‘better’.
I’ve just had to confiscate a red pen from the cat – perhaps I could out-source my marking.
This week we’ve written descriptive stories and letters.
I decided to change things around by visiting http://ifaketext.com and creating the start of a text conversation between two characters in our story.
The first thing I learnt in my lesson today was that I’m not up to speed with the latest text conventions. Apparently my third text should have read *understand and my sorry autocorrect was extraneous.
Once we’d got over my error it was fascinating to watch the children work.
One pupils who I know is a prolific tester wrote her first few entries in beautiful standard English.
When I asked her why she said ‘You’ve spent too long teaching me the right way miss’
Others really got into the spirit of things and I learnt a lot of new things.
The lesson led to a really interesting discussion on the use of ‘different voices’ both written and spoken.
Level 4: …writes appropriately for the purpose of the reader and in a range of forms
Level 5 …writes in a range of forms for different readers, using a more formal style where appropriate
Level 4: … talks and listens with confidence in an increasing range of contexts
Level 5: …talks and listens confidently in a wide range of contexts, including some that are of a formal nature